Saturday, June 8, 2013

Mortals


Pudgy indigo fingers
shook the air
enraged at his capture;
by mere mortal,
a blonde tressed one at that.

How quick was she
that he
never saw her shadow
ensnaring with feminine
divinity.

Could he rise above
when so many before
had fallen gracefully?
Perhaps he was only mortal
after all.

 

4 comments:

  1. i am sure she will find out...smiles...def would like to hear more of this tale...smiles.

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  2. Thanks Brian... it does seem that there are more chapters to this one. I hope I get to see through the mist soon! Thanks for stoping by!

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  3. Loved the 1st line ... This is a friendly reminder that mortal men still have the nerve to reach for the stars and of course divine women --- HAHAHAhaha....

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