tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post5211700577388571650..comments2023-06-29T05:41:17.549-07:00Comments on Tracie Skarbo's Creations: Beached EbonyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-61288647164897102992014-05-03T19:14:13.781-07:002014-05-03T19:14:13.781-07:00Stephen.. thank you for reading. I appreciate you...Stephen.. thank you for reading. I appreciate your words so much. Sending you love and light.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-87942812864844693182014-05-03T19:13:21.871-07:002014-05-03T19:13:21.871-07:00Thank you BechannyThank you BechannyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-57765791782152087672014-05-03T17:26:48.888-07:002014-05-03T17:26:48.888-07:00beyond any analysis of iambic pentameter or such…t...beyond any analysis of iambic pentameter or such…these words of a wounded warrior barely able to come back from the edge to find one's sanity amongst the driftwood and tides amongst the ebb and flows of daily life…you are to be commended and keep expressing it in words…absolutely touching…(love you)…<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-49873609798762117672012-12-05T13:32:08.057-08:002012-12-05T13:32:08.057-08:00A musical journey made richer with the continuous ...A musical journey made richer with the continuous use of assonance, which crescendos and then breaks. A lovely sonata kind of poem.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-32992511845239159642012-12-05T10:14:54.265-08:002012-12-05T10:14:54.265-08:00I am happy you enjoyed it... your words are apprec...I am happy you enjoyed it... your words are appreciated!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-81505700852134051382012-12-05T10:13:29.210-08:002012-12-05T10:13:29.210-08:00Thanks for coming by Claudia... :)
Thanks for coming by Claudia... :)<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-11544399973217861432012-12-05T10:11:47.351-08:002012-12-05T10:11:47.351-08:00Thanks Lazaro!Thanks Lazaro!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-21916541768714988842012-12-05T03:25:05.164-08:002012-12-05T03:25:05.164-08:00The imagery and the emotions they invoke are breat...The imagery and the emotions they invoke are breathtaking. I felt the ebb and flow of the tempo and for me this really enhanced the impact and permeation of your words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-2568246378666054362012-12-04T21:23:33.082-08:002012-12-04T21:23:33.082-08:00..and raw emotions in this...her desperate try to .....and raw emotions in this...her desperate try to hold on to those ebony keys and strings..i can feel this as a musician and of course way beyond..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-27193069301512466172012-12-04T20:11:16.005-08:002012-12-04T20:11:16.005-08:00" A cacophonous tempest
Of raw emotion" ..." A cacophonous tempest<br />Of raw emotion" <== I like!Lázaro Rojashttp://surgicallyenhancedmannequin.wordpress.com/guest-writers/lazaro-rojas/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-32341630967693358372012-12-04T15:47:26.367-08:002012-12-04T15:47:26.367-08:00Thank you ayala.. :)Thank you ayala.. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-42186345241771816722012-12-04T15:45:00.072-08:002012-12-04T15:45:00.072-08:00It is dark Brian...a pairing that is futile, and i...It is dark Brian...a pairing that is futile, and insurmountable. It is so sad when she tries to free the piano from the sand while the sea encroaches and steals it from her forever. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-83224906700240661502012-12-04T14:33:35.286-08:002012-12-04T14:33:35.286-08:00Simply beautiful! :)Simply beautiful! :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-13170921098624649722012-12-04T14:28:55.878-08:002012-12-04T14:28:55.878-08:00She caresses keys
And kisses strings...love the in...She caresses keys<br />And kisses strings...love the intimacy in that...the end feels dark to me...no heart to break..no cry of injustice...her cachophony of raw emotion....intriguing verse tracieBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-80139834444040550462011-12-12T13:09:52.092-08:002011-12-12T13:09:52.092-08:00Thanks so much Katley... I like this poem a lot be...Thanks so much Katley... I like this poem a lot because of the images it conjures for me. Thanks for coming by!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08917475421671859755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-67857069853194234292011-12-07T08:31:51.994-08:002011-12-07T08:31:51.994-08:00what stood out the most was the quicksand and the ...what stood out the most was the quicksand and the debris strewn beach with seaweed. I spent my childhood on beaches like that.Katleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349020685336580947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-77023463440753812652011-02-14T18:00:37.494-08:002011-02-14T18:00:37.494-08:00Beautiful poetry, as all of your poems are. Bravo!...Beautiful poetry, as all of your poems are. Bravo!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-896593451121442771.post-25362110795127384912011-02-14T09:26:50.287-08:002011-02-14T09:26:50.287-08:00Absolutely beautiful!Absolutely beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com